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We stop at the Temple of Diana He bends down on one knee My heart quickens… He ties his shoelace At the Orangery He offers me champagne A toast, “To us...” On finishing the loft conversion In the gardens He handles the crimson rose With the care of a surgeon Gazes into my eyes… And walks on At the Exhibition Room He pauses close to Winston “Such a great man… We’ll marry on his birthday; How does that suit you, My darling…?” Diana2 (Unverified), 09/02/10
-----------------------------------------------------------THIS COMPETITION IS NOW CLOSED! ----------------------------------------------------------- Thanks to all entrants - your submissions have been varied and fabulous. The winner of Champagne Tea for Two plus free entrance to Blenheim Palace and grounds on Sun 14th Feb is Diana2, with her lovely Palace-based piece, above. We'll be sending a runner-up pack out to all those whose work made our shortlist. Click here to see what else was/is on offer for Valentine's in 2010... My fingers are hungry for your skin Roam the range of your sleepy prairie I spoon you closer Before it's time to get up I satiate my wanderlust Under the covers On your curvy landscape IL (Unverified), 09/02/10 May I seduce you Make you feel Invite you to a dance Make you feel good A delicious display of emotion Make you feel me The rhythms of life Make you feel You're mine Enamored (Unverified), 09/02/10 The warmest place in the universe is On a tiny blue planet, Under the blanket, Where you are spooning me With your garden of love Loving (Unverified), 09/02/10 My big head, my big heart Two big thoughts For which my mouth is too small Unable to describe How beautiful you are Junko (Unverified), 09/02/10 Three-step plan: 1. You and me 2. ??? 3. Happily ever after Happy Girl (Unverified), 09/02/10 Blenheim Palace: a romantic revisionist history If e'er sweet goddess love could be explained, In valued scripts such insight not contained, Nor from the lips of wise and ancient souls, Could spring such wisdom; clear and bold. The answer lies through high and ornate gates, Stands magnificent, and for you awaits. O palace grand from your fine gilded walls, The glorious story of great men uncoils, The theatre of your proud yet mortal guests, Has pained, pleased, and delighted at request, In courtly balls and midnight masquerades, Desire has sparked, blossomed, and been betrayed. As Caesar your first lord entombed resides, The Duchess Caesarina by his side, A brave commander; in battle victorious, And she a political player notorious, A match of two ambitious minds, A partnership of power and strategy refined. Your seventh mistress passionate and wild, Spurned social convention, as playful child, And courted eros through alluring will: Rebel spirit Lady Randolph Churchill. Her linage watched such amorous games, And scorned these from their opulent frames. Nurtured beneath your painted walls and skies, And grown from boyhood in your gardens pride, Within Diana's temple in your grounds, To Clemy first proposed and found, happiness. And so Britannia's greatest son began, the lifelong journey of a married man. The greatest liaisons, loves, sorrow and cries, Unknown, unrecorded by scholars eyes, Belong to those who walked your rooms, In silent service - footmen, maids and grooms, A flushed face, ruffled petticoats denied, A trembling hand, or a timorous smile. And so you alone have watched unfold, Some of the great love stories never told. Annie (Unverified), 09/02/10 Rolling park, Beautiful garden, In the midst a majestic place, Housing the dukes and the duchess, It is called the Blenheim Palace, What a sight it is to see On the Valentine's day When lovers stroll on the green grass Take tea in china cups, Sweet smile and vows of love, The great house witnesses it all! Suchi (Unverified), 09/02/10 You lock our fingers in against the cold Whilst I revisit vague memories of A grey hooded duffle coat and wanting To go home. We pass a group of muffled Elderlies, who all still tell those same old Stories to lonely toddlers that loll Towards that oh-so-familiar view Which my childhood has reduced To a forgotten boredom. Though under this beloved pale sky, where the Blueish birds just sit and watch, unnoticed, There seems something different about this Place; yet nothing's changed. The tired lake still Looks cold, and dying branches of passing Trees still score white clouds until they stain the Skies with spilt reds and crookéd blues; but then I catch your eye, smile because I haven't been listening And finally realise that walking Here with you, dear, watching your glistening Hair as the sun hangs in the distance, has Slowly shown me that this is a place worth Stopping for, simply to look, And share with someone you love. R.J.C.B (Unverified), 08/02/10 I would love to spend Valentine’s day Sipping tea, and acting so very fancy Over scones and cakes, at Blenheim palace. I would steal a kiss in the secret garden, When I ask “will you marry me?” I hope she won’t say “eh pardon?” If she says yes, we’ll sip champagne at Blenheim palace To celebrate my engagement, to the most wonderful girl called Alice. Tim (Unverified), 08/02/10 As we walked around the Palace grounds Arm in arm along the way I realised my true love I’d found And hoped today would always stay Fresh in my mind as I knew then The Love of my life was by my side. The paths we followed meandered through The pretty gardens and ambling glades Paths straight and curved through grass and heather The beginning of our lives together Laura (Unverified), 07/02/10 Heaven pours stars that bounce and settle where Blenheim gently sleeps; Where lighted bows defer to hallowed earth, where Capability’s vision creeps. And so here we go and catch a falling star, for the fragment least Would surely melt the heart of the most wretched beast. But beastly not nor shall ever be, She I love, who gives her love to me. Where else then but here do I dare ask for her precious hand, So my rude grip does not crush nor yield as Talland? No; judgement on my love shall only here pass, Only Blenheim, by endless sprung fields and silent lakes of glass. Bova (Unverified), 07/02/10 i do not know where i would go if it where not for you, love. i do not know how i would flow unless i knew that you were in flood i scamper here i scamper there i watch as you gently pull my hair out of my nose passages How kind, how thoughtfull i wonder why, or if i even ought to have married a slug but then again i suppose it shows the reason i'm only a lettuce love blunderbuss (Unverified), 05/02/10 My body writhes in passion lusting for your touch I yearn to feel you in me this wanting is just too much. It’s exciting, all this foreplay don’t keep me in suspense now move a little closer my body’s way too tense. Seduce me with your eyes while taking off my clothes escape with me tonight to a place where noone knows. This romance’s getting wild hotter than a flaming fire so come inside, you make me hot and soothe my burning desire. I’m lying here next to you after making love tonight in the morning dawn when we arise these sparks will reignite. Lisa (Unverified), 03/02/10 I will always remember the night we first kissed. We hardly spoke. The evening was late. It was cold, a typical English night. Under a soft light my eyes gazed into yours and a spark ran down my back. Our embrace sent a rush of warmth through my veins. I still feel that warmth, whenever I am with you. D.F (Unverified), 02/02/10 I would swim across the lake for you, in ripples of icy waters. Then when I get back to land you could warm in the servants' quarters, we could sit and watch the day go by, with coffee cream and cakes, and watch the boats one has hired sailing round the lakes, then when the night draws in, and I've got a little chilled, we can walk under stars in the park and I will be fullfilled. patricia (Unverified), 01/02/10 There's a Valentine for everyone Long hair, short hair, curly hair shine, brown eyes green eyes blue eyes shy, big nose, little nose snotty nose green, big mouth, little mouth teeth all clean, two arms two legs two feet let's run, two knees that knock, now that's not fun, fingers thumbs, nails that grow, hair under armpits to shave hey ho, wrinkles, dimples moles and warts, don't pick anything of growing sorts, bruises, bumps, scars that show got them playing games you know, cellulite here cellulite there, from eating habits when we didn't care, face pack here face pack there covering the lines not covered by hair, hair colour here, hair colour there, cover up the grey where people stare, liposuction here and liposuction there to make me look younger slim and fair. trisha (Unverified), 01/02/10 theres a hollow in a tree, down by the bridge, its where we found our love, you and me, we were kids at the time, playing hide and seek, now the years have past ,we always take a peak, of where we first found each other, and giggle at the way,we kissed each other, it will always be our spot , that we will visit every year , and if the tree should fade away, it will still be in our memories,of where we used to play tweasha (Unverified), 01/02/10 I love you more than tea - and I am English. Hopeful (Unverified), 31/01/10 Love At the border they will ask me, Nationality? Where were you born? Where do you live now? Is that bag yours? Did you pack it yourself? Who are these names at your address with you? I will answer, I am a naturalised citizen of a small country Bounded by two doors, with a population of three. The baggage I carry belongs to that nation. I can't say any more which parts of it are mine and which are his, But we hold a handle each, and we packed it together. You won't know the national anthem, it is a whisper. Patriotic? We don't need to be. Our roots are too deep. Those names are my compatriots, and we travel together. We are each other's greatest strength. We are each other's greatest weakness. CR (Unverified), 31/01/10 It's a feeling that's inside us all That someone will bring out A smile when you're all alone Is what love's about It's something held inside a child You can see it in their eyes It's something in an older couple After 60 years of highs It's couples in their twenties Buying their first house It's the birthday of a five year old Getting his first mouse It's shopping for a fish tank To fill it full of fishes It's painting red your kitchen To fill it full of wishes It's a feeling that can explode With excitement and with haste It's something that can creep upon you Without giving you grace It's something to be cherished It's something that is mine So for all that you are perfect still... Will you be my valentine? storm (Unverified), 29/01/10 Love, for one day only? Love is mucky, inspiring, tiring, tough! Folk never quite admit that, especially not today. It is about showing everyone the sweet-smelling smushy stuff, the “always love you”s, and the “being better with you, than without you”s which make you stay. Today is the day where we don’t mention jealously, rage and that weird power play. It is just best not. But after Valentine’s is over, the kisses made, the chocolates eaten and the cards put away, We still have love in our own weird way. MM (DI User), 29/01/10 Why do I love you? There is no explanation, just simple self-evident fact. You are part of me. Without you I am less; with you I am more and the world a place of fruitful endeavour transforming the barren wilderness JRCG (Unverified), 29/01/10 Our courtship began on a Blenheim walk Your smile beguiled, we laughed and talked We meandered through trees, past lambs new born Admired flowers, clipped box and velvet lawn We joined a party on the Palace tour Through spectacular rooms of stately grandeur Outside again we got lost in the maze The day was spent in a romantic haze Children's squeals of delight filled the air As playground adventures they happily share Capability's breathtaking landscape views Display natures colourful vibrant hues Romantic Blenheim has a place in our hearts We visit often for memories it imparts Picnics or music proms Blenheim welcomes all Coach loads, families large or small Propose there on Valentines, don't forget the ring Romantic Blenheim has everything! Scilly Lover (Unverified), 28/01/10 To England we came in the month of May It was Churchill who showed us the way We have found the Palace and it's Gardens And I my Valentine, down by the Roses dorodoro (Unverified), 28/01/10 Dearest Christy my beautiful dreamer, beam on my heart Happy Valentine As another year passes on by, the stronger we grow My beautiful dreamer, prince of my song We are adorned in our patchwork, colors brightly gay. Woven threads intertwine like two minds Tones of deep gold and emerald green shimmer in the light Silk textures crush like to lips into each other My glorious dreamer, awake into me. Aurora_Dawn (Unverified), 27/01/10 You watch me put my make up on, Watch me brush my hair, The mundane things I seem to do, You always stop to stare. You always have to hold the bags, Always get the door, The little things you do for me, make me love you more. You never try to argue, Never make me cry, You only ever make me happy, You're mine and god knows why. This love is not a grand gesture, love is not a show, Just you being you, Is what makes me love you so. ELF (Unverified), 26/01/10 A hundred vows have been made at Blenheim A thousand lovers have crossed these grounds A million kisses have been exchanged in the Palace's shadow And yet I feel that ours must be something special The lake sparkles The flowers sway The birds call Love is just as grand as you believe it to be Trancerat (Unverified), 24/01/10 LOVE Love can leave you in fits of laughter, Love also forgets to put the seat down after, Love gets us take-out when you just can’t be bothered, Love, please share that bhuna you’ve ordered! Love makes us go crazy-doo-lally! Love is not just a quick snog in the ally, Love tells the truth but never fat, I know. Love comes round once, or twice- or three times for Joe. Love will always see you for what you are, Love transcends whether you’re near or far. Love will always find its way- you’ll see, Love just happens, so let it be. Dottiepeas (DI User), 22/01/10 Violets are blue Rose are red and I love you darnzzy (DI User), 21/01/10 |
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